"Soylent: a Foodie Minimalist's Perspective"


#1

A more honest review of the idea of Soylent than you would expect from a “foodie minimalist”. (whatever that may be) The author goes back and forth on their opinions. The conclusion is an overall slightly positive outlook on Soylent, but with some caveats.


#2

Maybe I don’t have a great grasp of what minimalism entails, but I was surprised by how long that was.


#3

Certainly not minimalist in word count.


#4

Ugh. Needs an editor. Couldn’t read past the second paragraph. Gems like “completely nutritionally complete” and “is antithesis” had me doing a double take way too often. If you can’t figure out how to use commas to breakup run on sentences, don’t just throw them in anywhere.

/rant off


#5

After proper editing:


        Awesome


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