"Soylent: a Foodie Minimalist's Perspective"


A more honest review of the idea of Soylent than you would expect from a “foodie minimalist”. (whatever that may be) The author goes back and forth on their opinions. The conclusion is an overall slightly positive outlook on Soylent, but with some caveats.


Maybe I don’t have a great grasp of what minimalism entails, but I was surprised by how long that was.


Certainly not minimalist in word count.


Ugh. Needs an editor. Couldn’t read past the second paragraph. Gems like “completely nutritionally complete” and “is antithesis” had me doing a double take way too often. If you can’t figure out how to use commas to breakup run on sentences, don’t just throw them in anywhere.

/rant off


After proper editing:


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